All Comments on 'The Letter'

It's a very interesting, quirky narrative. I like your word choice, and you are obviously very aware of and careful with line breaks. I need to read more of your poetry and think about it to comment more specifically (my failing, not yours), but I think this is good stuff you have here. Have you read much of Wicked Eve's poetry? It might interest you if you haven't because you have the same kind of edgy-quirky tone here (imo)that she often uses. :-)

I read Angeline's comment just before starting to make mine. Wow, she's good, because I read your poem and absolutely loved it and wished I had wrote it. lol