by greenmountaineer
although I don't think it is as well-constructed as your other submission today. There's a lot about it that's really good--some great ironic lines and twisty--funny sex metaphors. That is very good, indeed, because it's hard to write anything erotic in poetry and hit the right note, but your tone works well and is consistent across the poem. Otoh, I think there's stuff that can come out because it isn't really adding anything to the poem, and I don't get the comparison of witch hazel as a better alternative to therapy. Maybe that's a cultural reference of some kind that I'm missing, just my opinon. I hope to read more of you though; you have talent. :-)