All Comments on 'Little Katie is Daddy's Girl'

I have to say that was quite a moving story, look forward to reading more.

Even for erotica, this is a ridiculous male fantasy that illustrates little understanding of a real human woman’s body. At one point he describes fisting a woman’s cervix, which gives her multiple orgasms...that’s just unreal. It makes my cervix hurt reading it. So I took off stars for that, and then I took off stars for his horrible writing! LOL. It was like the author used a dirty thesaurus to find way too many synonyms for keywords like penis, vagina, ass, semen, etc. Ranging from 1980’s romance novel lingo like “manhood” and “hot little box” to such creative terms as “poop chute” and “molten fuck lava”. It reads like a cringy parody of erotica. I honestly regret reading it but felt a responsibility to review for unsuspecting future readers. -Luna