All Comments on 'The Hot Tub'

Loved it...more so since you said it is true. Those are the best stories. Keep writing!

Even hotter because it was true. I admire your spirit of adventure and look forward to hearing a lot more about your experiences.

Well told, and obviously magically experienced!<BR>Adam

Wow Renee, very erotic and well written. I'm glad I've found your submissions -I can't wait to read the others. Like Amy, you've got me masturbating at work!!! Great profile picture, too!

Just found this, and I have to say, I love the way you write! Your telling of this story was done very intimately, making me feel like I was right there. That's the hardest thing to do as a writer. Keep them coming. ~Tori

I loved that this was a real story and that you described so well your feelings and emotions during this encounter. You're a great writer!

Your writing style is so easy and genuine, I believed the whole story. The guy's role was enviable. Hope yu two are still happy. Some stories go into such exacting detail, blow-by-blow if you will, that it breaks the flow. Yours had just enough detail to follow the sensuous touching without turning into a poor porno.

Very poor word choice

It's nice to remember your first isn't it!