All Comments on 'The Treasure Hunt'

by Baxter72

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
well done

That was an unexpected surprise. I mean, how good it was, that is.

The premise was kind of obvious, but who doesn't love a good camp counselor story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
enjoyed the humor

A very good story, well written and the plus was the humor. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Although Jessy got laid in the story, she lay on the deck as did you. (Look up the difference between lie and lay, particularly the past tense.)

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