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lordchilworthlordchilworthabout 15 years ago
thanks

well writen, succinct and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
minus the love...

would have liked it more if you'd left out the "i love you's" at the end. just doesn't happen, even after a bonding experience like that.

PacoFearPacoFearalmost 15 years ago
Bled chocolate syrup and cried gumdrops

I really like that turn of phrase. Hiya - I saw your comment on one of my stories and thought I'd peek in one of yours and return the favor. Keep up the good work. :)

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