The language quality is poor. No seduction. No shyness. No story build-up.
baby the story lacks energy motivation and fire add it up and see the heat of red chilly going down your belly.
total bullshit, a total loss on everything.
Apu is a lucky guy. If I had an Aunty Rina, I too would want to be suckled by her. a delightful fantasy. Thank you.
Love the subject matter, but hard to follow poor grammer. Needs some development....
I love the story. Just what i was looking for. are there videos to this kind of story??
i dont care about the grammar, i dont care about the stuff other users said,
but i do absolutely love this story! wanting for its continuation!
The writer totaly ignores plausibility and just writes what he wants even if the whole thing becomes as believable of sunshine in the middle of the night
Like, the female char apparently has milk 15 years after her childs death??? what kind of crap is this, seriously???either he knows nothing about women, or knows nothing about writing, or both
Its total bullshit, moreover, I remember reading a story by some other writer, but more correct in grammer on the same lines of this story, I think this dude might have copied on from him., this dude is a pirate, hahaha.
The story was good but a little far fetched. And everyone who critisised his grammar and then spelt GRAMMAR incorrectly really isn't in a position to penalise their story over cases of poor GRAMMAR, THICKOS!!!
i find it hard to belive a 35 year old woman would still have milk after 15 years not breast feeding or that a 20 year old would be treated like such an infant
Aunt Rina's must have had hairy armpits. Pl describe her sexy armpits.
you must write more on this & also Anita's story - you're good
Please post the continuation soon
This story needs to be re-worked. The language barrier leaves much broken story-line. I could not beside if Apu is a male or female. Try again.
Apu is obviously male it talks about his throbbing dick.
Is it just me, or does terrible spelling and really poor grammar turn other readers off too? I mean, come on, "her bossoms"? I would happily proofread anyone's story just to avoid these disasters. I couldn't get past "milk-bottles" it was too distracting and awful.
I will pardon the writter, obviusly there is an Indian accent in the making but the story is great, Let's here the next level c'mon.
How is the Aunt lactating after 20 years of delivering a baby?
very good hope you keep it going
where is the continuation?
Rina aunty u rock. I wish I would be that Apu.
Realy a awsome story
i am the luckiest person in the world if i am suck aunt rina nipple to suck
love it waiting for next
I WANTED MOOOOORE LOL
when will you post the continuation. a very sexy and hot story.
Sorry, but doesn't work for me !
I think that the reason why the Indian woman's breast is excessively leaking could be that she has pituitary, metastasizing, tumor of the breast. This would have resulted in the passing of the cancerous gene to the young born that is being breast feed. The development of cancer in the New born may then lead to jaundice that killed the only child of the aunt.
I am assuming that this is a real story. I hope that you would find this to be very interesting.
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