All Comments on '(Indian) Aunt Rina's milk.'

The language quality is poor. No seduction. No shyness. No story build-up.

baby the story lacks energy motivation and fire add it up and see the heat of red chilly going down your belly.

fucking crap

total bullshit, a total loss on everything.

Apu is a lucky guy. If I had an Aunty Rina, I too would want to be suckled by her. a delightful fantasy. Thank you.

Love the subject matter, but hard to follow poor grammer. Needs some development....

Love the subject matter, but hard to follow poor grammer. Needs some development....

I love the story. Just what i was looking for. are there videos to this kind of story??

i dont care about the grammar, i dont care about the stuff other users said,

but i do absolutely love this story! wanting for its continuation!

The writer totaly ignores plausibility and just writes what he wants even if the whole thing becomes as believable of sunshine in the middle of the night

Like, the female char apparently has milk 15 years after her childs death??? what kind of crap is this, seriously???either he knows nothing about women, or knows nothing about writing, or both

Its total bullshit, moreover, I remember reading a story by some other writer, but more correct in grammer on the same lines of this story, I think this dude might have copied on from him., this dude is a pirate, hahaha.

The story was good but a little far fetched. And everyone who critisised his grammar and then spelt GRAMMAR incorrectly really isn't in a position to penalise their story over cases of poor GRAMMAR, THICKOS!!!

i find it hard to belive a 35 year old woman would still have milk after 15 years not breast feeding or that a 20 year old would be treated like such an infant

Aunt Rina's must have had hairy armpits. Pl describe her sexy armpits.

you must write more on this & also Anita's story - you're good

Please post the continuation soon

This story needs to be re-worked. The language barrier leaves much broken story-line. I could not beside if Apu is a male or female. Try again.

Apu is obviously male it talks about his throbbing dick.

Is it just me, or does terrible spelling and really poor grammar turn other readers off too? I mean, come on, "her bossoms"? I would happily proofread anyone's story just to avoid these disasters. I couldn't get past "milk-bottles" it was too distracting and awful.

I will pardon the writter, obviusly there is an Indian accent in the making but the story is great, Let's here the next level c'mon.

How is the Aunt lactating after 20 years of delivering a baby?

very good hope you keep it going

where is the continuation?

Rina aunty u rock. I wish I would be that Apu.

Realy a awsome story

i am the luckiest person in the world if i am suck aunt rina nipple to suck

love it waiting for next

I WANTED MOOOOORE LOL

when will you post the continuation. a very sexy and hot story.

Sorry, but doesn't work for me !

I think that the reason why the Indian woman's breast is excessively leaking could be that she has pituitary, metastasizing, tumor of the breast. This would have resulted in the passing of the cancerous gene to the young born that is being breast feed. The development of cancer in the New born may then lead to jaundice that killed the only child of the aunt.

http://www.llli.org/llleaderweb/lv/lvsepoct95p72.html

http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmedhealth/PMH0001259/

I am assuming that this is a real story. I hope that you would find this to be very interesting.

wow this is the greatest of all great stories i've ever read....minds of to the experienced one.......

that's a great sucking experience and wat abt remaining....?

Pardon the pun, but this story sucks. Get an editor!

'Apu' ?

that name made me laugh and i couldn't get past the first sentence of the story,

oh well

remove this ugly story

its an indian story as expected😛😛😛😛😛😛😣😣😣😣

SHITTY

You need courses in English Grammar and Composition. Pretty badly, I might add. I like the story, but besides your poor English there is no subtleness here. Events move way too fast and no explanation. Rather, "Wham-Bam, Thank-You Ma'am" kind of thing. Just for an example. This young man is, presumably, over 18 and yet his Aunt has been lactating all of his life without his knowledge. She Expresses her milk, wasting it by the way, twice daily at least and he never twigs to it? Even though he, like all young men, is thoroughly besotted with Aunt Rina's breasts. Then he just walks in on her milking herself into the sink and she turns around and says for him to sit down and she'll get dinner? This story could be improved very much with some proofreading and rethinking the story progression. This would be good in the illustrated category. With an Indian Model and some good photography it would be excellent. The settings and backdrop are good. An humble home, as Aunt Rina is a single woman and being 'Mother' to our character. She wears a colorful Sari and top and the flawless brown skin of her breasts are capped with chocolate aerolas and thick nipples. They are poor, so have only one bed and share the same mattress every night. In warm climates women go to bed and simply unloosen their Sari and drape it over themselves for sleep. As a whole, Indian women are very modest but warm climates do not allow for very much to sleep in. So they wear very little in bed. Aunt Rina should have teased her nephew a little longer by making him milk her into a cup and drink from the cup before relenting and allowing him to Nurse at her Breast directly. We know, of course, how turned on and ready the nephew is even before he begins to suckle from her, but we should read more about the sensations she feels as he massages her breast to "let the milk down" in preparation to begin to suckle. We need to know about the direct line that seems to exist between her nipples and her clitoris. About her need for him. About how overcoming the taboo of breastfeeding him has eased her anxiety about allowing him to take the next step and enter her. We also need to know, has he fallen in love with Aunt Rina or with him losing his virginity to her will he lose interest in her. I think the writer, Susan Jill Parker could really do something with this. She doesn't post stories on here in her own name anymore, sadly, but she can truly spin a web. Work on it some more.

I cannot wait for the follow up. I love this scenario. I hope they eventually make love.

Fake but not bad