by orvette1
The story might have had a few grammar mistakes in it , but while reading the work, I felt as if the guy was standing beside me telling the story verbatim. It may have not been in perfect English,but when you are reading that someone is sucking his sisters cunt, does it make enough difference to distract from the story? Good Job and hope that you will continue with the hot story.Thanks .....Rich
Today is no exception. I enjoyed your little bro/sis incest tale. I hope to see more of your submissions.
great article it was like you the writer it happened to you everyone should at least have a chance to experience once in their lives thanks .
Not enough story or backstory to completely understand their relationship and why they suddenly became lovers. Please keep writing.
I must say it did have passion! or rather Passion with a capital P! You do need to smooth it out a bit with boring background but do keep the passion.
Story is good I’m surprised how many times some people cum in stories shame it’s not that easy in reality