All Comments on 'Visiting My Brother'

For a first it was well done. Keep it coming. Themes that I enjoy is the brother being aggressive and the sister being slutty behind closed dorrs.

Loved the story, now please continue it!

so yeah i found your story to be practically amazing and we love if you continued writing stories along the same theme cause that was just perfect

Please keep going with this story...I just can't get enough...Its very well written and I'd love to see Ell spend more time with her big brother..

seemed a little choppy. sexual description could be more erotic. a good start. you will get better with each story.keep it up.

For your first story this is great. A little choppy but still good. I hope you continue to write.

Loved reading your story, it is a great beginning. I look forward to reading more of this story. You should write another part to this story soon.

I love sibling incest tales and appreciate your attempt at writing one. Keep at it. I think you will develop into a pretty good story teller.

the brother was just an asshole rapist and doesn't care about her this story belongs in the nonconsensual area and the writer needs to see a shrink

Dude...you're reading erotica about sibling incest. People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones. Yeah, it's definitely dubious consent, but so what? It's certainly not out-and-out rape, and even if it was, who are you to judge? Millions of women have rape fantasies, myself included. I thought it was hot.

I can't believe there's no comments..

I LOVE this story! It was amazing. I want more!

this shit belongs in the nonconsent area not here there are readers here that have been raped and do not want to be reminded of the hell they went through that is why they have a nonconsent area for sickos like you should be sued for causing undue trauma USE THE PROPER CATAGORIES

As I was reading this story... the beginning struck me as good, but get this; it got better.

In fact, it was *so* good that I absolutely couldn't stop reading, it was brilliantly written, as if it was pulled out of a professional novel.

Now, the ending felt rushed, completely out of pace with the story and characters, it was strange. It was as if a really good writer started the story and then at the end some amateur took over.

Anyway, I hope you keep writing, if you give it some time and practice, I'm sure you'll be one of the top writers on this site.

And, no, it wasn't rape. It's nonconsent if she doesn't want it. She wanted it. Thank you for the story. I loved it.

Trite expressions make for boring reading.

Sexy, provocative, and it's actually a bit more of a realistic situation than some of the other incestual sex stories. well done!

I did like the development and slow build...I wanted to see how you wrote your stories and I did enjoy it. Well done :)

Disgusting..how can u fuck ur own brother u slut

Oh god if only I had a big strong man like that to take charge of me!!

Good story by the time I was done my cock was rock hard wish I was not a virgin any more

always portrayed as sluts? I get annoyed with demeaning women all the time

I hate these stories where there's an underlying message that no means yes. It's harmful to society.

If this chapter is any indication of how this author views women and thinks this is the way they should be treated, it doesn't say much for him, especially being as it was the guy's sister in the story. I'm going to try one more but if this jokers next story follows the same pattern, I'm moving on. I don't need this crap.

I can't believe a young woman would write a story with the brother having the attitude towards his sister as is shown in this little story, and treat her the way he does. I guess if this is what turns the author on, more power to her. It just isn't for me. Bye.

Very good first start! ..Ive gotta ssy though, it read kind of strange, sort of choppy? Some bits seemed a bit hard to figure, like the bar scene.

Anyway thanks for writing for us! Looking forward to more from you!

I like the story, I bet that you have fucked your brother several times and you just wanted to let it out of your system. I think it is a great start to a series.

Yes, a little rough in places but one great story line for sure !! A new chapter would be great, with more specifics on their bodies and having them talk more; expand the dialogue. His sister hopefully is on the pill and she after thinking and dreaming of the experience; wants to screw him hard and a lot. Hopefully, he'll teach her how to be great in bed etc. Thank you.

My sister and I were lovers. We remained lovers for 4 years then something happened we had made promises to each other but she broke them, I miss her all of her the talks we shared, hanging out, the intamacy, and the sex, yes there is a difference maybe one day we will be back together seeing how the world is ever changing maybe one day brother sister relationships will be accepted and allowed if no children are conceived I am 50 and she is 44 maybe one day C6

A RAPE story. 1 star which equals .000001.