All Comments on 'Kate's Test Ch. 03'

Yup I enjoyed the continuation of the story. I vote for chapter 4

Pretty good, but I think the dildo at the end was a bit too much, guess we'll have to let chapter 4 be the real judge :)

Sadly this story set has followed the same pattern as all unofficial copies. It's a dud compared to the original.

Mostly because your english skills are somewhat lacking, I noticed sentence structure errors indicating English is a second language without even looking at your biography. Perhaps if you had written it in your native german the wording would be better, however i somewhat doubt that as I explain below:

What irked me the most is that you go the character personalities COMPLETELY wrong. You played claire out as a sociopath and Kate out as a stereotypical cowardly sub. Which niether are. The originals had some form of realism to them, a perfect example is the forced piercing, if that happened IRL claire would get locked up for GBH and the piercer would aswell and would permanently lose her liscence and reputation.

You have unfortunately soiled the story you hoped to compliment, casting dirt upon its name by taking it to unrealistic and quite frankly stupid extremes. Kate's test is one of my absolute favourites as the author is a near perfect wordsmith. It's like an amatuer trying to paint more paintings in the style of da vinci or picasso.

You've basically pissed in the flowerbeds instead of watering them.

A fabulous continuation of a story! So devious & erotic!

The only part I didn't like was when it went into her cervix

I think you picked this story up very well. I look forward to reading the rest.

I think you did a great job to continue the story. Alas, so long ago.