All Comments on 'Breaking Mistress Dana Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very promising

I love the concept and look forward to the development of the story, so far excellent

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very Good Begining

Nice start , keep in that way. You can use same blackmail, bondage, heels

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
And when the show began

Dana repeated loudly her desire to be set free. That she had NOT agreed to this. Just to make sure everyone heard her so that when the trail started and the videos were viewed her denials and arguments to be set free were denied. I'm SO glad you stopped posting this crap. It was unimaginative drivel that was poorly thought out and poorly written. Some of the dialogue must have been written by a ten year old. Just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good start

This is a good setup. It makes the reader try to predict an unexpected outcome and gets a good mental picture going on what will happen.

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