All Comments on 'The Bad Girl'

by christo

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
This story turned out a lot better than I thought

A nice little twist at the end of the story that made the whole story nice.Thanks for the well written story.....Rich

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
This story is fine.

But I am not sure where the next story is going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Predictable

I was so sure it would end up being her husband, I scrolled through it to the end, and SURPRISE!!, I was right.

It's been done hundreds of times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Where it is eventually going

The same place that mine did behind Senor Frog's in Mexico. After dancing

and teasing a man that was obviously well hung, I was interrupted by my

husband telling me that our dinner was getting cold. After a quick dinner, I excused myself for a "quick breath of fresh air" and met the man outside. Led

through a narrow passage between buildings and taken fast and hard from

behind while leaning against a dumpster and watched by a waiter having a smoke on break. I returned to my husband without my panties having to dab

my legs under the table with a napkin. That is where is goes. Had it not been

our seventh anniversary, I would have told him what happened. Lynne

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 15 years ago
Lynne,You are one sick puppy.

I hope the writer ignores Lynne and what she did and takes it away from anything close to what she does.

christochristoabout 15 years agoAuthor
Uhh...

Yeah, I don't think I can advise getting schtupped outside a Senor Frogs in Mexico. I did find it amusing that because it was their seventh anniversary she didn't tell her husband. I think the gift for the seventh anniversary is supposed to be wool, it's the EIGHTH anniversary that you're supposed to give your hubby panties loaded with the semen of an anonymous tryst outside a bar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice story

It was a great story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A pleasant surprise.

I typically avoid the laughably namned "Loving Wives" section as it's usually a depository for not-so-thinly disguised -or outright baldfaced- sexism and misogyny of the worst kind. Having read a few of your other works, enjoying them immensely, I gave this a shot and I'm glad I did. The twist end was a nice surprise.

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
You got me!

Cheating without cheating. Hubby helped Wifey live out her fantasy without breaking her wedding vows! You had me going, until Hubby admitted that he was the guy who fucked her rotten outside the bar. LOL

5 Stars!

BriteaseBriteasealmost 9 years ago
a bit obvious

But very nicely so, and very well written. Last commenter missed the point I suspect!

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[02.09.22]

Sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I thought she was a cheating slut... until she wasn't. This definitely beats cheating on your loving spouse. I just hope she never craves the real thing with an actual stranger. It's easy to escalate things once the door is opened. That being said, she seems like a genuinely loving wife so I think she'll be fine.

rbloch66rbloch662 months ago

Games are fine, as long as both remember that’s all it’s meant to be.

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