by Sabineteas
I'm truly happy to see this series return, and as a standalone story, in NonConcent/Relutance this would be a 100%...
But both as a Exhibitionist, and specialy as a Sabine story i feel that it is drifting of the mark.
One of the key factors i liked in the "at school" series is that Melanie seems to care for Sabine, i feel this is totally missing from the new series.
Also, it was a semi private story between Sabine and Melanie, others were not involved much. In the new series it seems most of the campus (exaggerating i know) is invited in..
As i mentioned at the start, this seems to be verging on a NonConcent/Relutance, witch is totally wrong for the Sabine/melanie dynamic...
I do hope the next chapters will rain inn some of the errors in the first 2 chapters, and get this superb series, back on the same track as it was before they wen on summer holiday.
This is one of my favorite series... I hope to see more soon!
I have noticed that you have been writing for years and I am trying to play catch up now. Your ideas are refreshing and in one of my favorite genres. Please keep it up!
So deliciously good! We need so much more of this story!
Sadly, this is the last chapter written about Sabine & Melanie...can we get more. It's been 8 years since we started with Sabine & Melanie, and 3 years since you added to the story...is it possible to get another chapter? Maybe they've graduated now and are living together & you can give us a recap of their last two years in college & one year living together after college? Either way, I'd love to read more about these two!
This is my favourite story on all of Literotica! Please, please, please add more chapters!
Okay at first I liked the series because of how dominant yet really caring Melanie was. But this is just ridiculous! Melanie is a fucking jerk that doesn't even care about sabine. Sure she makes "passionate" love to sabine sometimes, but that's just to make her stop worrying about the actual issues in the relationship. C'mon sabine has to stop being a stupid, idiotic, slut and stick up for her damn self! Sabine should tell Melanie everything. This is not a relationship, this is merely playtime for the two. Two people don't love each other just because of the hot, erotic, sex that they have. They love each other because they get along, they can talk to each other about hundreds of things and barely ever disagree. two people love each other because they can be themselves around them and have fun with them as well. Sabine is using her as a little fuck toy and can care less about what the hell sabine wants or doesn't want. Jesus please fix this series in the next chapter! I don't want to keep imagining sabine being manipulated by Melanie just for her own personal pleasure. Just because Sabine wants Melanie to make the rules, doesn't mean that Melanie doesn't have to listen, care, or even think about how Sabine feels about everything that goes on in their relationship. Making her strip in front of a bunch of guys, making her suck two guys dicks just because of homework, making her have sex with two girls, making her strip in front of the stair case for everyone to see, making her pose naked and dry herself off in front of the window so everyone could see, making her do disgusting things in front of a bunch of old women, making her take off her panties so some store clerk can look at her vagina, making her breasts erect just so everyone can see, and everything else that goes with the list. I understand that sabine likes being dominated, but she needs to realize that this is not a relationship, nor is it even a splash of "love". She needs to realize that she is seriously being looked at as some sex toy that can make no decisions at all in her life. Please please please, Im begging you, stop making Melanie into such a pathetic, bitchy, jerk that cares nothing for how Melanie feels about what exactly she is being forced to do for people. And please stop making sabine into some dumb slut that is too stupid to even realize that what she has with Melanie is not love. True love, is not created based on how "happy"(aroused should really be the word) you make the partner. If Melanie really loved her, then she would not only listen to what sabine has to say about what she does, but she would allow sabine to speak her TRUE mind, and will definitely love her NO MATTER WHAT, even if she doesn't do what melanies little cunt wants, including not having sex. Overall, alright in the beginning of the series, but TERRIBLE FROM THE MIDDLE TO THIS CHAPTER, NEEDS WAY MORE IMPROVEMENT PLEASE \(TT-TT)/
Ah sorry I meant *Melanie is just using her as a....
forgive me >o<
I am disappointed that you are not updated story.... please update...
Why you are not writing further? Please Continue The Story... Its The Best Story on Literotica
I love the character of 'Sabine'.
Is there a list of all of Sabine's stories in chronological order as she experienced them?
Of course "At School' comes before 'Second Year', but there appear to be many other stories less obvious in there order.
Hello writers .. i’ve already read this story from the first year chapter until this second year and i loved it .. i just like sabine and melanie character that you created in the story .. its so hot and i really hope you can continue this story .. ty for making a good stories for me to read ..