All Comments on 'Practice'

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Keep up the good work

That was amazing. Lots of buildup, great writing, realistic and sexy. Keep on writing!

It's funny and hot at the same time. Great story

I enjoyed the humor. So much laughter in self-denial, and I feel like it's poking fun at some of the other lesbian stories.

I think "Practice" is really well written ... I liked the sly, subtle way you let your characters discover each other "for the senior guys" without "doing anything sexual with a girl." And I thought the buildup towards the end was excellent. Nicely descriptive and very hot!

Denial is a wonderful thing, and this was a wonderful story.

I LOVE this story; love the way it builds up slowly, gradually, while keeping this "denial" thing another reviewer spoke of. It's almost like they're keeping this level of "innocence" about it on one level, while just going deeper and deeper and deeper on another. Just like the make-out sessions I remember as a youth!! You did an excellent job on this, DirectorX, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!!!

A simply fabulous story with a wonderful angle!

practice does make perfect

Making use of the Unreliable Narrator in an erotic story is a tough thing to pull off. It's entirely too easy to make it appear unrealistic or contrived, but you found a nice balance. The repetition of the "I don't want to do anything with a girl" idea was just frequent enough to make the point clear (especially given the placement) but just rare enough that I didn't feel you were insisting on it, trying to make sure everyone got the irony. It takes confidence to do that and not feel the need to over-explain, and I felt you struck a nice balance.

I can only agree with the others, the gradual advancement coupled with the consistent denial almost makes it feel like a parody. This combination of excitement and humor makes the story quite unique.

Awesome story. ;)

Great story. Whenever my friend invites me tk her house to sleep over, we have to sleep in her bed together, and right around 1:00 am she scoots close to me and puts her leg over me and omfg it feels sooooo good.;)))))

I think that would make any straight girl want to practice : )

i want to practice and im straight?!!.. or WAS anyways. ;)

Just a great story - so well told. I loved the theme and how real it could be, plus, I got I got a lot of "practice ", too. Thank you ! Very enjoyable !

Cute story. The teenage "newbies" will really like it and probably learn a lot. Kinda like training wheels to a 10 speed bike. Please note, this is not to say adults can't learn and enjoy this story. But I remember when I was 13 or 14, all me and my lesbian friends did was kiss and hump. None of us knew anything about sucking breasts, let alone oral sex. My introduction to oral sex came when I was 15 and tried to impress my new girlfriend at the time (who was 17) by going down on her, only to have her tap me on the head and say, "this is your first time, huh?" So a story like this can be really helpful. Moreover, I can vouch for the adage, "practice makes perfect." My lovers comments are a whole lot different now and I say that with a big grin on my face:)

This made me cum

If this is real you honestly need to own up to the fact that your best friend just wants to fuck you because she likes girls and you go along with it because you do too but you don't want to admit it

So Bobby Lee and Will Sasso Mad TV Episode where they pretend to be gay to get girls. Basically what this story is - with the difference that their performance is more porn inspired than hooking up with guys. Meh.