by a_silent_love
I love the story, and the writing is wonderful. The sex that he and his mom have is some of the best I have read. I love the fact that she is as hot for him as he is for her. T hat is one of the better parts of the story.Thanks for the great chapter.....Rich
Very nicely done........loved both of their appetites for each other. Then again mother son sex is the hottest type of story and I am sure fantasized by many............
Hope to see a sequel...........but please no babies..........
Both chapters of this story are very good, but you definitely improved with the second chapter...
You took your time, and built up the story a bit more.
The sex? HOT!
Keep it up.. I know I am. ;-)
I've really liked it so far. I agree that you improved in Chapter 2. I'll be looking for more.
hi there
It was a little hard to put the characters in
perspective at first but after that it was a wonderful story
i love the stories. i really got involved with a girlfriends
mother after the girlfriend got married.please keep wring i enjoyed so much
wayne
I find it hard to understand how a girl under 22 could write such a realistic depiction of a mother/son relationship. This is a very, very talented author and I hope we are going to hear much more from her in future.
Loved reading this story. Looking forward to more chapters to this story. Please write & post more soon. What happens in Paris?
I don't think I've found a more erotic depiction of a mother and son going at it anywhere on this site. Seriously awesome.
But for God's sake, write more! There are so many places you could go with this! I would urge you, in support of other comments I've read, to explore the theme of the two of them breeding together. That could become a very long series of stories right there, and I think we all know how good that would be....
Congratulations once again on a fantastic story :)
Danny xxx
I agree this story needs more chapters. This is a outstanding story. Please write the next chapter soon.
You have to finish this story(soon). It is great & has to be finished.
Really hot and erotic, but still filled with sweet love between mom and son.
A great story with a good storyline. Well written and edited that made reading the story a pleasure.
I hope that this author will write more stories in this genre.
Thanks for the great read.
A_silent_love is a very young woman, 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a teenager. And yet in this excellent two-part story she is able to capture, in elegant prose, the passions of both her 18 year old hero Brad, a tall very well-built boy, and his voluptuous mature mother. Like all boys Brad is deeply attracted to his mother's cunt, while his mother, like all moms, loves her darling baby boy to pieces, especially what he's got jumping around in his pants, his fat young prick. Mother yearns for what her boy's got sloshing around in his brimming young balls, and more than anything Brad aches to give that frothy gift of his creamy semen to his beloved mommy---right up her twat! This writer knows how to push all the buttons of wannabe---or real life!---motherfuckers and all the many mothers who'd LOVE to get son-fucked, again and again, good and hard!
I hope someday you take the time to fully develop this story into a mini-novel. I really want more of this series.
Your writing is good.