All Comments on 'I Wanna Watch'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
good story and nice little switch

I thought it was a good idea, pulling the switch on her like they did.Maybe the next time he could have two buddies over to bang her. Hot thought. Thanks for the story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
This is a joke right?

This is you trying to be clever and write a story that somehow got into loving wives when really it should have been in humour and satire. You know taking the piss out of the loving wife section. If this isn't what you intended then you are way off base. The story was too short to explain anything . Of course you might be writing a stroke story but even then it fails.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Waste

Of time and talent, but I knew it wasn't going to be any good when they were watching pro basketball.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent!!

Fun horny story. We liked the light touch. Notice the idiot guy who made 4 negative comments at once. I guess the dick is pretending to be 4 people to add weight to his sick views.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Good

I don't normally like this type of story but it was well written. I didn't like the ending where she is mad but still enjoys it. Not sure why but it sort of stopped the flow of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
could have developed it more

she agrees to make out with him and then poof, rick is fucking her. her undressing, him starting to fondle her could have been written out and slowly while they're hot and heavy, he could have called rick over. it was a little too quick

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hey writer Missy, Which one of your Cuckold Father's Best Buddy is your Biological Father?

And which one of your Cuckold Husband's Best Buddy is your Children's Biological Father?

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago
FUCKING HOT STORY

Loved his sly little trick

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