by jomomma141
i loved it! please write more i love seeing black women fucking white men! its so erotic!
it's bad form to go from ass to cunt without cleaning up first. I don't like that, even in fiction. I still gave you a hundred because I really like the story otherwise.
I generally like WM/BW stories, but I did't like this one at all. The main characters just did not win me over and the sex scene depicted of vaginal to anal penetration and back again was just plain old nasty and unhealthy.
I found this story to be well written but with room for improvement. The numbers to describe the characters were distracting and I agree that going back from vaginal to anal sex was gross. I also really didn't get a sense of the interracial element of the story.