All Comments on 'Morning Surprise'

You need to watch your tenses and spelling. You really should have someone proofread your story because with the mistakes in tenses and spelling it was hard to read. Other than that it was a great story.

Story is not too bad. I do have questions about the amount of orgasms in that short period of time. If you could go into more detail. More detail on the feeling of your sister's pussy. How she felt as you blast your load of cum into her. DETAILs!!!!!!!

Why do these noobs always have to have DD tits? I don't understand that. I really don't. It's nothing but exaggeration and distracts from the story.

I quit reading after the mention of double D tits.

Foolish.

If all the brothers & fathers have 8 inch dicks & all the sisters & mothers are "flawless" with giant tits & model physiques then they wouldn't be fucking family members no matter how big a slut they are. And the cum...give me a break. Again, as a fantasy this story isn't bad at all. But cumming a "half gallon?" While I know it was an exaggeration, hyperboles like those can kill a story. We like some degree of realism in our fantasies so we can imagine it better. When you say you came 4 times & the 4th time was the largest load than the previous 3 combined then 97 out of 100 people will stop reading. And the notion of the mom being hypnotized by seeing her son's cock is getting really old.

story was awsom hows about the second time with your sister

You raped your sister? that's gross

Man what you did had to be done if I were you I would do the same. You did not not rape you sister 'cause girls don't admit it when they need a cook.

Do more please!!!!

Plz do more!!

Totally unbelievable, for reasons several posters have already mentioned. These orgasms, without forethought, foreplay, skill, tenderness, or credibility, are just plain hilarious. Clearly, you don't understand sex, let alone writing. Go back to wanking in the stall in the boys' room and quit cluttering up places where grownups visit!

good start nice and simple yet hot

Everybody has perfect bodies, huge tits and big cock?

What a crock of crap.

I can't believe this stories all the parents seem to be alright with this. I would have got shot on the spot

"bull

I can't believe this stories all the parents seem to be alright with this. I would have got shot on the spot"

I know right? My dad would have killed me for fucking my sister. Although I must admit, mom's aren't that tight, especially those who went through normal birth, instead of cesarean.

i do not care if its true or not and i did enjoy the story but i would have appreciated some more detail... maybe next time would you please add in as much details as possible! thank you.

This story AND the writing was pure bullshit.

If my dad caught me, his head would have become a nuclear bomb going off as soon as he new what was goning on. I am not joking!

Did you ever learn about English and grammar on the odd occasions that you possibly attended school?

I have no idea how this passed the editors. The grammar is horrible. I call BS too.

I call annnony insane!! This asshole reads all these stories and then bitches like the fag he is about them.

God is a filthy cocksucker that swallows.

This is true story? Bullshit. You can come without being touched 3 times but you don’t cum as soon as you put it in her. It’s too dumb to be true.

None of these are true and this isn't even that good.

Bad grammar. Proofread your pathetic long story. You wish it was true.