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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/03/09

Sweet memory

Though my sweet little step-daughter was not a virgin...NOR did she beg to be fucked.............but I have a lot of memories of the time in her bed, fucking her while her mom was at work.....We both kept the secret..........ahh yes the sweet memories.............This story reminded me of her....a sequel would be good!

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by Anonymous12/05/09

amazing short story!

I rated this 5 Stars because of how dirty, forbidden, and well written it was. I saw each part of this story like a movie. I stayed up late just to finish reading. I might become a step dad just to reenact this story. My new fantasy. Big UPs to Author!

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by Anonymous01/24/10

Wish it was me

Wish in my younger years I had a stepdad that fuked me like that...hot, hot.

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by Anonymous01/27/10

bullcrap

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by Anonymous04/12/10

bullcrap indeed.

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by Anonymous05/12/10

In Mhy Opinion

This Story Is Very Arousing And Entertaining. =] Good Job.!

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by Anonymous05/26/10

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!! What is wrong wit u people

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by Anonymous06/15/10

Too distant

It's like it's written somewhere between third-person and first-person perspective. Very uncomfortable to read. I never got close to "losing myself in the story." Perhaps if you hooked up with a good volunteer editor here on Lit'?

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by piper006606/29/10

Would love to have a step-daughter like that

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by bayou_baby_girl07/26/10

Let's Hear It for Zoe

Could use some work here and there but OMG this was a very arousing story.... makes me wish I had a stepdad named Zack..... Great Job!

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by Anonymous09/24/10

WoW >> That was GREAT Thanks

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by Anonymous02/18/11

My step daughter is too young still, but hell I can't wait until she's older, she's only 13 but has tried to feel me, and stroked my cock in the night when she has come into our bed I wake up and find her hands on my cock. She knows what she's doing and however wrong it is, what it does to me. In a few years time I know I will not be able to hold back and will have to fuck her hard!

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by hornychick61708/29/11

I disagree with the others

I don't understand why there needed to be comparison between the daughter and mother in Zack's eyes thinking she fucked just like her mother. Since when do daughters inherit their fucking style or arrousal or whatever from their mothers? It isn't like leg legnth or hair color..... jeez. For me deflected from the story and dampened my enthusiasm. Sounds like belittling the mother which i didn't like and don't see the reason for this.
Second, an innocent virgin talking so dirty? I don't think so. She sounded more like a common slut than a virgin.
And third, him going straight for the ass? Uh uh.
For these reasons, i give this story a low score of 3 stars.
Try taking to heart what i wrote, u can still improve.

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by Anonymous02/17/14

Great Start

I think this is a great start, continue her story =)

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