All Comments on 'Roxanne'

I like all three of your stories up to this point. The writing is hot and well expressed. If I had any suggestion it would be for you to provide greater depth -- a greater description of the principals. What do they look like, what do they think about, do they have a history? The owner of the club seemed to just appear out of the air and I'd like to know more about her. Like I say, just a suggestion. BUT, keep it up.

Liked your story! You might want to read Polly Dares. I don't go for much description either as these are not supposed to be great works of fiction just something to, well, you know - something naughty but nice to tickel your fancy! lol storyteller07

wow!!!!!!!!!! sexy shit..... my hand is workin my pussy right now!!!!!!!!

Nice story, short and sexy! Thank you for sharing it with us!