by littlebondagegirl
A very well scripted piece of writing with what's left out causing the tension. Looking forward to the sequel and hope the sense of stark inevitability keeps the pace of the next chapter. Congratulations.
I really didn't think I was going to like this story but you did an excellent job telling it. You definitely have me curious as to what the future hold for the baby boy indeed. Keep up the good work. This story was awesome.