All Comments on 'chalice of our lips; the serene'

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
elegant

"silvern pooled" was a little too archaic/heavy for my ears in comparison to the lightness before and after.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
your poem

Mentioned in the New Poem Recommendations thread: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=30341931#post30341931

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