All Comments on 'Bye Bye Miss American Pie'

Loved the discriptiveness.

Beautiful Writing...I would love to see what you do with some more drawn-out sex scenes

Welcome to the club. My story isn't the same as yours but it seems that has ended much the same. I started spanking my partners from the time I was in my early 20's and it only seemed natural to find a woman that enjoyeed feeling pain and pleasure...and sus sexual joy and bliss thru spanking. Lastly when I married it was esentual that my wife enjoys the feel of my hand, paddles, floggers and many other tools/toys.

and 'erotic' spanking story. Impressed with your male characterization. Really, a guy I'd like to know. The bartender was well done also. Thanks -- five stars for you -- Take care

It is all about dat azzzz man!!!

Horrible writing with punctuation errors, poor use of paragraphs, etc.

I’m glad to see you’ve improved over the years.