All Comments on 'Cousin Emma Ch. 01'

by touchy_miss

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Anonymousabout 15 years ago

awesome start

Great stuff - I hope he ends up breeding her!

Scotsman69 almost 15 years ago

intense

A very fine first story miss. Needs tighter editing in places, but you could be very good indeed. You have the right touch...

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

This is a good start

but the story is not complete. It's really the beginning of a much longer story it seems to me, but it IS a great start. Please write the next chapter! And keep writing! There is a great deal of sensitivity in your writing that reflects your fine poetic sense. Tap into that - and with a little editing finesse…oh my…

aa11xxmark almost 15 years ago

More please touchy_miss

Highly arousing!!!

More please!!

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

Next...

When is your next part to this story coming out? This is a beautiful and intensely erotic tale that yearns to continue.

spank_master about 14 years ago

The rest of the story

I wish you had finished this story .. it was such a good start

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