by talk2024
Definetely a top notch sexy story that had me writing in ecstasy!
Very hot story, U need to continue this story line...
What happens on the rest of the cruise???
I was rubbing my mound as i read this and i came at the same time you did!!!!
thank you
make a part two to this story i want to know what happens with the rest of the cruise
such guilty pleasure...excellent leaving us to guess the rest
Such a short story yet filled with an intensity..
Part of me would like more chapters of how they become lovers on the cruise, but some stories are best kept as a story....
Miranda
Erotic, an easy to read and visualize a woman's emotions during her first experience....will there be more?
Thank you for writing this wonderful short tale. I am a bisexual man, so I don't have all the beautifully complex feelings and thoughts which women do, however I have had a lot of different sexual experiences and this story resonated with my times with others. The passion, confusion, excitement, wonderment, and best of all the last thoughts and self-pleasuring which brought this story to the end was superb. This small glimpse reflected so well the larger world of confusion in which we all live our lives.
Great story. The way that you write made me feel like I was actually there watching them. The only reason I didn't give you 5 stars is because it wasn't long enough. I really wanted to see what happens if she had gotten into the shower with Joanne
The opportunities were endless for a continuation of their first time together
This is an author displaying the best of literotica.
No political views or manhating.
Pure uncut erotica.
Thank you for this scorching hot story.