All Comments on 'Virgins'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I came hard

Definetely a top notch sexy story that had me writing in ecstasy!

PredatorSmilePredatorSmileabout 18 years ago
Hot story

hot story. i loved it. keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot

Very hot story, U need to continue this story line...

What happens on the rest of the cruise???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
great stuff, very well done.

keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
HOTTTT

I was rubbing my mound as i read this and i came at the same time you did!!!!

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
awsome story keep writing

make a part two to this story i want to know what happens with the rest of the cruise

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 14 years ago
beautiful

such guilty pleasure...excellent leaving us to guess the rest

smallncutesmallncuteabout 13 years ago
Wow

Such a short story yet filled with an intensity..

Part of me would like more chapters of how they become lovers on the cruise, but some stories are best kept as a story....

Miranda

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loved it....

Erotic, an easy to read and visualize a woman's emotions during her first experience....will there be more?

liz33ndliz33ndabout 8 years ago

Very nice and well written. I want to read more. This is very erotic. Yummy

mouth4umouth4ualmost 8 years ago
It was so real

Thank you for writing this wonderful short tale. I am a bisexual man, so I don't have all the beautifully complex feelings and thoughts which women do, however I have had a lot of different sexual experiences and this story resonated with my times with others. The passion, confusion, excitement, wonderment, and best of all the last thoughts and self-pleasuring which brought this story to the end was superb. This small glimpse reflected so well the larger world of confusion in which we all live our lives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
There's always a first time

Great story. The way that you write made me feel like I was actually there watching them. The only reason I didn't give you 5 stars is because it wasn't long enough. I really wanted to see what happens if she had gotten into the shower with Joanne

The opportunities were endless for a continuation of their first time together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is an author displaying the best of literotica.

No political views or manhating.

Pure uncut erotica.

Thank you for this scorching hot story.

Anonymous
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