All Comments on 'Janice and Jason Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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Just another old man with too much time on his hands. As for the story? Just your run of the mill stroy of faithful wife who wants to swing and a brain dead husband who wants to let it happen. Well all the swingers out there will love this story. So enjoy it while you can.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
Really well done, I like the way you think

Now that they have seen each other fuck, It's time that they switch for the day. Rut each other until they can't hardly walk. Hard cock and wet pussy all weekend long, with plenty of good food and cold beer, warm sunshine with a breeze, and bright full moonlite cool nights, so they won't sweat too much when fucking. That has to be a dream come true. Thanks for the good story and hope to see a follow-up chapter......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Try Krrping the names straight

Not bad, but try & keep the names straight. First Layla is sucking Karl, then it's Mark, who the hell is Mark? Then it's Leyla instead of Layla.

baranbratbaranbratabout 15 years ago
Try Keeping the names straight

Not bad, but try & keep the names straight. First Layla is sucking Karl, then it's Mark, who the hell is Mark? Then it's Leyla instead of Layla.

seacoastcoupleseacoastcoupleabout 15 years ago
Awesome.....

So what now? Please post the rest! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good story and fairly well written, but the names got mixed up. Sometimes it was Leyla and sometimes Layla, and then Mark popped up as the name for Jason.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Story smelled fifteen years ago, and time hasn't done it any favors.

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