All Comments on 'Three Days of Watching my Wife Fuck'

if you don't see what wrong you need mental help.what you selling we aren't buying.

That was truly the most beautiful story I have ever read on this site. You powerfully captured the range of complex emotions and thoughts that would likely accompany such an amazing experience. There's actual tenderness on top of the carnal imagery. This is how real human beings behave and feel.

Encore!

happened after they got home. Scott was whistling as he came into the front door on his first day back at work. He didn't notice the envelope pined to the couch. he went about his normal things, thinking of how he could get Gina in the mood to fuck some guy's in his class at school. He kept talking to her as he stripped and stepped into the shower. His cock was hard and dripping cum and he couldn't help but make it cum. He kept talking to Gina, although he couldn't see her. he came out of the shower and went into the bedroom to shower...That's when he saw that her side of the closet was empty. He was shocked awake from his dreaming about her getting fucked by several men at a time and saw that her clothes were missing. he then noticed that all her other personal stuff was missing. He rembereb seeing the note and he snached it and read it. I will never understand how a husband can see his wife act like that after he got her drunk. And jerked his pathetic little pee pee poff whild he watched three younger men use her over and over again. I have gone to live with Stan. He saw me before we left and was crying he was so upset at the way he acted. neither of us are going to ever touch alcohol again. You get your self drunk you cant help it...You are a wierdo. Dont try and fight the divorce and agree with what I have asked for because stan and all the other guy's will sweare that you got me and them drunk so you could get your kicks. Perhaps ther is some woman somewhere that will put up with your shit. Go the lowest class seedy bar and find her. Don't contact me or the boy's will hurt you bad. Goodbye wierdo.

Well I loved it. I really liked the wife's little speech at the end. Would love to read more of your work

This is the best and most realistic wife-sharing story I've ever read. I'm dying for a similar experience, but my wife will be even harder to convince considering we don't drink. The emotions and inhibitions are real.

Thanks for writing a story that so perfectly matches my dream of watching my wife have sex. She did have sex w/ her ex boyfriend for me and that was so awesome I could hardly think straight the whole time. I would like her to do it again for me but she has backed of the idea for now and I respect her to much to push to hard for a 2nd try.

The story is interesting and believable, mainly due to the strength of the emotional content. Word choices are sometimes odd and could be better, and the story seems overly focused on bodily fluids but still, better than most of the stories here.

Wow is the only word I could describe this story with. I rarely read long stories but this one kept me going on and on until it finished. The way you've written it is absolutely breath taking. I'm a married man too and it'll always remain my fantasy to show off my wife to strangers and see them fucking her. But that's a fantasy only and I know there's no way it's going to be possible. I'd rather kill myself before allowing this to happen. That said it's always great to read such stories and fantasize it's happening with me only. I hope you write more such stories. Please do take some time off and write up another new adventure whenevr possible. One of the best wife sharing story I've ever read. Bravo :)

-Snmi.

Nice combination of situation and sensation! Encore from these characters?

any semblence of control went out the door, and it was no longer mere fucking. their lives are changed, and whgat next? she is open to similar events at the end of this vacation? the end of the marriage as they knew it certainly and just..the end?

A beautiful description of wife sharing at it's best. I am buying what you're selling. If you are into this kind of thing you can't help but enjoy your story. If you're not into it then why read it in the first place. By all means please write more.

the measure of a story is if i read it more than once... read this one over and over... the two negative reviewers might be confused about what site they are on

half my age fuck my brains out, they all were seperate incidents. As I read this, I couldn't help but touch myself and wonder just how it would have been to have them all together over and over and. . .WHEW!. . Did I enjoy the story? Oh hell yes!

That a husband would do this and these so called men think its hot. This isn't what men do, this is what a pack of dogs do and to read some perverted idiot say its beautiful is just unbelivable, but guys whore out their wives, mothers, sisters, ect. for money all the time so I guess I shouldn't be supprised, but I am.

Really enjoyed it. I prefer stories where the wife is at least reluctant and gets persuaded to go along. This one fit the bill nicely -- and the extra guy sneaking in to get some at the end was a nice touch! You're correct when you cite that repeated interaction is likely to lead to feelings beyond the raw sex -- and as such, a risk to be contemplated when embarking on this course.

terrible

This happened to my wife many times over the years. She did fall in love, but knew that changing me for another wouldn't be as fun as I was more in tune with our life style and others were too possesive. This was closer to reality than any story I've read. Very HOT.

If you don't like stories like this, don't read them. They are "stories". Get it? Not real. Fiction. If you don't like sex stories then why are you cruising this site?

Fantastic fucking

I cannot tell you how this story has hit home. I loved all the sex but I also liked the last comments about sex turning to lovemaking. Truly amazing

one of the top five erotic stories on the site. Thank you for sharing.

I started loving this type of story many years ago reading in a magazine. In all the years I've been reading these stories, this easily rates in the top few of my all-time favorites. The writing is good quality and believable.

By far one of the best I've ever read!

Wow, very hot! Thanks. I wish my wife were so bold!

This is the best story/fantasy I've ever read. Thank you very much for sharing.

I'd love for my hubby to get me drunk and show me off and see what would happen. So aroused while reading this and loved the ending too. Hubby won't know what hit him tonight ;-)

Very good story arc, and thanks for makinig it realistic, intelligent, and not over the top. Very hot because it's believable and by not turning into a permanent slut, she was even more desirable.

Yeah, let someone else fuck her because you can't!!

What a piece of shit.

I particularly dislike cuckold stories. However, this wasn't exactly that and it was extremely well written. I think that it proves the point that no matter what the subject, even one that you normally dislike, a good writer can make it believable and suck you in.

...no not with the story, it was great, enjoyed every minute. Well written and a well told story. The problem we have are those few idiots who don't seem to be able to read. The title clearly states he watched his wife fuck for 3 days, then they comment on how they don't like these stories.

What idiot would read something they don't like, yet alone take the time out of their day to comment on the story? Only idiots. Idiots with no life, no wife ( 'cuz they kicked her to the curb for fucking someone other than his tired, fat ass.), no dog (wife got the dog in the divorce), no house, no car...just a barcalounger sitting in the middle of his living room as he watched porn on the TV in his efficiency apartment. What a slob.

You know the old saying...no guts, no glory...to do what the husband did in this story not only took guts, his wife got the glory.

And actually the content of the story shouldn't matter to most readers as they read what they like and don't waste their time on those stories that don't contain what they like. What actually matters is the quality of the written word, the grammar, the spelling, the way the story is told.

I can say this story is told well, it is well written and easy to read. While the content is to my liking I have enjoyed reading this story a couple of times.

Well done Newbie2008, well done.

Great story...nice ending too. My wife and I swing hard to not fall in love. It's why we try and only play with other couples. Single guys seem to cross the line all the time. It's is about sex and enjoying it.

I have read many, many wife sharing stories over the years, and this one rates as one of the absolute best ever. By the time I made it to the second page, right when the actual sex is beginning, I found my heart pounding, my hands shaking - almost as if I were experiencing this incredible erotic situation myself.

I have shared my own wife several times over the years, and the author describes the feelings, the events, in such a realistic manner that I wonder how much of this truly happened.

From a strictly literary standpoint, the pacing and storytelling themselves are excellent, and the sex is done in excellent detail without being too "over the top". Masterful job.

Very well written, I thought I was there. Heart racing and feeling flushed.

Excellent story, totally believable. You’re an excellent writer - like to see some more stories from you.

One of the best of this type. As one that has shared his wife the feelings discribed are so real .. also the danger of falling in love.

By an asylum inmate !!

A great story, well told. I really like the way you finished letting Gina tell how she felt about their experience and then showing how the latter had affected them subsequently.

I tried to login, but the computer I'm on wouldn't let me.

I don't know if this is a true story, but it sure seems like it. Since I have been in a "somewhat" similiar position before, I loved how you expressed feelings I have felt myself. Gina's character was so well done. I loved the reluctance and the giving in; very erotic. Very well done.

Really well written story. One of the best I've ever read.

This story if it is one brings back so many cherished memories

watching my wife getting fucked an fucked and fucked again.

Our experience was similar but different.

Passionate hours never forgotten.

Thank you very much.

You captured the fascination of watching your wife with other men exceptionally well and in particular the excitement of seeing their semen in and on her. I hope you write more.

My husband and I have two male friends with whom we had many 3somes and enjoyed all of them very much. We also have a female friend with whom we had numerous FMF encounters and also loved every minute of these. Frankly, I can't understand why some comments on this story are so bloody negative. If all parties enjoyed that kind of lifestyle that's their business. So all you naysayers why are you reading the stories if you are so much against the idears or lifestyle?

been there done that, but the last page at the end is so true. And as for a FMF 3some, done that, but if you love you wife being a male, who do you have an orgasm with, not what you guy' s think it might be.

Quit writing asshole because all you do is stir up the fags bitches.

that someone who would read the entire story and THEN shit on it or the author, is really saying a lot about himself... If it's not your thing, (In spite of the very obvious title,) then why the hell would you bother reading it, let alone comment.

An author who can write this well can allow us to vicariously share the experience, intensely, without having to risk anything of our own.

After all, group sex, gang bangs, are such a pervasive part of our species, that the human male penis, alone of all the mammals on the planet, has evolved into an efficient semen extraction pump. In order to extract the already existing semen away from the cervix so their's was pooled up against it last.

That's right; every one of our ancestors was conceived in a gang bang! Which incidentally explains the female capacity for multiple orgasms; coming with each partner. We are NOT a monogamous species!

THAT is our biological heritage, and any woman who says she's never even thought about more than one, is probably lying.

Thank you for a well-written story about a woman reveling in fulfilling her biological heritage!

Oh, and think about it; if you truly love a woman, meaning her happiness is important to you, could you ever deny her the opportunity to experience the greatest pleasure available to anyone on this planet?

A remote episode, which she got well into. It was her primary adventure not him with any 21 yo females. The dam burst and she wants him to not forget but put it in perspective. A good time for him to have an ex and go forward without her

Pathetic piece of crap from a pathetic author and viewed favorably by some pathetic commentators.

Very fine effort by the author. Easily visualized. I thought the psychological aspects in the final part were quite refreshing and key to the entire retelling. My wife & I have had these experiences and they are mentally challenging and exhausting. We never tried it though with the addition of alcohol as "3 Days" is predicated on. We did it "straight." That inclusion of alcohol is a difference maker as one can readily see here. I like "Gina" & her husband.

While you could have engaged a few more of my own personal kinks, I found this to be a well written, engaging story. The "swept away on a tide of lust" aspect lent credibility to the scenario. The "came to my senses almost too late" piece rang very true, as well. Thank you for this nicely done story.

I would like to have fun with your wife. Please reach me foranightride@gmail.com

No losers in the story. You treated all the participants with respect.

As for the negative comments. There are people out there that think that all human sexuality is dirty. Not surprising there are a few of these people on this site.

I can't believe how hot this story was.

I would love to live such a story in real life. I have been working on my knockout, good-looking woman for a while to get her primed. I keep telling her how I want to watch her fucking and sucking-off other guys. I have noticed that she is beginning to respond sexually to these hot stories. Maybe, just maybe it will happen soon.

I am going to have her read this story. I bet she will be ready then.

This one of the best erotic stories I have read. Masterpiece

great writing and story I got so excited you are one of the best writers here

The very worst on this site.

What man wouldn,t want his wife to enjoy two younger guys ?

A supremely hot, well written and well thought wife sharing tale. I thoroughly enjoyed reading such a hot story. Keep up the good work!

This was a truely wild time for you .the story told as a true event witch brought more. intensity to it. thank you

Yeah, the problem is you stupid idiot. Who elected you spokesman for the cucks? What is it with you asses that think only your opinion counts. Well you can stick your opinion up where the sun don't shine.

I'd love to fuck your wife in the ass

This was very Hot reading material. It started to make me think of doing this with my wife...then you brought me back to reality. Very Hot Story.

Captures the reality of how these things actually go down.. they often start of reluctantly, wondering if its actually going to happen.

See http://www.literotica.com/s/donna-lets-loose-in-san-diego?page=5

very well writen absolutely wounderful

cool - i am going to try this with my wife!!

I like this story. It's highly erotic but you've got to ensure you don't create confusion by misplacing your characters. See page 2&4, Stan was not always the guy with the unusualy thick & long cock. Take note for your other stories to avoid such mistakes.

only part of the story that could be better is where they cum inside her should have been scott didnt know i went off my birth control and am at my most fertile time now after all the potent young sperm entering my uterus i am pregnant with twins

At 5 pages, was longer than it needed to be. Spring Break was a great premise for cougar action.

One of the best I've read! Wicked hot! Believable. Not too 'over-the-top,' but also not do gorily graphic. Just enough. Wouldn't mind revisiting Scott and Gina on their next vacation!

my wife and i go to a swingers clubs every weekend and goes to the open room and gets fucks by 8 guys and 2 girls she takes 2 cocks in her mouth and cock up her cunt and arse if you want to fuck her put your email address on this page she is the best fuck ever

What a great read, well thought out (couple of out of place thing) but well paced, thought it was a good read.

Oh my God! Its not everyday u get to read something as captivating as this here... Amazing! Gina's one hell of a wife! Truly in luv wit Scot. And so mature! I wish I find such too. Wouldn't mind checking them up on their next vacation... Keep it up!

I have never been so excited. I wish to hell I was a girl so I could enjoy all the fun in all my holes.

Good story...very erotic. Love the imagery of her legs being pulled apart for Stan to enter her!!

To the guy who takes his wife to a swingers party - stevie_baines@yahoo.com

yes i think so. i have the same fantasy and we cae ery close to do it.

the writting is extremely good and matches fantasy of probably most of us

Cuckolding is not a particular fetish of mine, and fiction I've read on the subject usually leaves me cold through being only understandable to people who share the fetish to the extreme, or being poorly written.

You, newbie2008, have written something that captivated me and that I enjoyed from start to finish. That was so erotic and so human - so real!

Well thought out, beautifully expressed. Real erotica, not just one-handed typing ;)

I hope to read many more of your stories. :)

One my favorite stories so far!!!! Would love to find a man that would love watching me fuck others.

newbie2008 - Well written and one of my favorites. You have a gift as a writer. Keep it going..

And bowling_gal... we are out there ;)

Many of the Loving Wives stories feature punishment or catastrophe of some sort coming to the wife because of her cheating. I figure the guys trashing your stories are angry that the husbands and wives in them are not devastated in some way, the cheating wife suffering a worse fate than the broken-hearted husband. The haters are lured to the Loving Wife story because they crave to feel the wife (their ex-wife?) suffer some horrible fate. Since that doesn't happen in newbie's stories, they hate those stories and are compelled to tell us the stories are crap.

The stories are great. They actually make the readers who like the scenarios believe they are possible. I haven't had the experience, but some report they have and vouch for the verisimilitude.

Great tale, sounds like one of our vacation adventures

the emotions, your description of her-very well written- and the way you wrapped it up at the end

and couldn't believe the wanker nyminus' post

You have a way with words. I basically read these stories for enjoyment, but also

I like picking out errors in grammar, or spelling (just my thing). I found very few with your story. With some, I can't believe how the "English language" gets butchered.

It was hot, and exciting. We have never experienced anything like it, but as most horny men, have fantasized about it, and watching my wife with another man...

Written by a mercenary faggot.!! "1" .

I liked it very much. Definitely a cut above the norm. Well written, very hot, and a dash of reality-check at the end.

I'll tell you, a fucking dirty spinless coward, thats what. The worst story I have ever read on this site. The rest of you who like that sort of thing need your sick head read. I wish I could give stories like this a minus score. Sick, just plain sick. That's all folks.

RVWS

Hit the nail straight on the head.

Fucking awesome story! I couldn't take my hand off my cock the entire time. One of my all-time favorites. I will be cumming to this story over and over again. More please!

The less mix in a drink... the more alcohol content... the longer it takes for someone to get drunk. Get the right mix and the alcohol enters the system a lot faster than with a 60% plus alcohol content.

I like the way you give personality, humour, emotions, to the ladies in your stories ; they are nut just masturbation fantasy objects -

A bit heavy on the auro-biography sometimes -

I liked the way you pulled the story to an end, realistic, and a win all situation. Agreed, this is a fantasy, but it sounded good to be true and it is very difficult for a realistic fantasy to end on a win-all note. Cheers to the author.

As for the naysayers - I think it is only one or two of them posting again and again every now and then.

Pure fucking trash. Only the cucks could like a story like this.

I have to chuckle at all the whiners who moan and groan about other readers who have a different take on this story. As if they wrote this story and were being attacked personally for the content. Damn people, grow up and stop your pitiful crying, like its going to change anything. This happens on every story. One guy even suggested that the same person writes all the negative comments. Man you're delusional.

No comment on the story, didn't read it, since the comments pretty much told me what to expect. But when I want a good laugh, I read the comments, especially on controversial stories, like this one. You poor chumps with demented minds. You should all turn your wives into sluts. What a turn on, eh?

Thanks for a great read. Enjoyed the realness of the story.

Not much more I can say that would be unique to what many have already said. Well done. Arousing. This was three nights of enjoyment for me also. Not often a story here explores the complexities of an event like that. Hope to see more. Will be delving into your other submissions. Thank you.

Clucks win husband loses.....

i agree with the nameless twat at the bottom of the comments.? however my words are polite.? its rubbish.? have a nice day.?

The wife and I thought it was a great read that kept us in there until the end.

This story was clearly good enough to convince my wife to want the same action depicted in this story. She is somewhat hesitant but wants to find some guys for a similar scenario. Dreams do come true.

Well, my wife and I had our first 3some while dating and after married 6 months, I shared her with my life long best friend who was hung and we all loved it. Over 18 years I shared her with A LOT of different guys and the secret was that with only a few exceptions there were no repeat fuck sessions and thereby avoiding the potential emotional hang ups. She LOVED being shared and getting all the different cocks and LOVED me taking part or watching and I LOVED watching her being a total SLUT for the guys. Anyway, GREAT story..... Steve.

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cant wait to read to the wife hot!!!! one of my favorites ever