All Comments on 'Alpha Protection Ch. 01'

I love how you are introducing the story and I look forward to Maddox's reaction when he learns of Tempest's name.

wow luvin it cant wait for the next chapter x

Story line was ok but as for the editing part...well, it leaves much to be desired.

Great start can't wait for the next chapter

An interesting start and so like a canine, not interested in listening when his primal needs are aroused... lol.... Really looking forward to where this goes.

It was a great start. I am interested to see where it goes, but you need a new editor.

please add more.

Finally, a really decent werewolf story! This was great I can't wait to read chapter two, although you need some spell check or a new editor!

Seems a lot of us are of the same mind. It's a good start, but your editor needs to step up as there were several spelling errors. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please continue to wrote I am anxiously awaiting this story..

Great start! Please write more soon>

This story starting out real good. looking forward to the next chapter.

I hope you continue. This is good.

I hope you continue the story but you need a new editor. There were too many mistakes from grammar to sentence construction.

I'm in love, I'm in love and I don't care who knows it!!(from the movie Elf) This was an excellent beginning. Bravo! Keep up the great work.

Made me want to read more. Excellent character development; I love how you make the wolf a separate "being" within the man. It's like the dichotomy that exists within us all. Half human. Half... Other.

I am wondering if you got your inspiration for this story from "The Lords of the Underworld: series by Gena Showalter...amazing series...very hot...same type of writing style it seems...even though I haven't read the whole chapter yet...sounds really good though...:)

I like it, but it needs to be edited....please

It's very good but I agree with Anonymous, it does need to be edited. Watch out for spelling. Keep writing though, I really like Maddox's character, especially his protectiveness.

I enjoyed the idea of Maddox (or any man) can show so much compassion. Love is possible here, and I am looking forward too reading more of this story.

Really like the start of this. It is looking more attractive and can't wait to get into it. The story length looks about right for me. I want to know the man....sounds delicious, sensitive, aware.

It full force with the intro' editing and grammatical errors detract a little.

Loving this start. I'm sure its going to be very interesting to watch Maddox fight with his wolf! LOL

Poor wolf I know he was dying being denied

This seems like a Lupanwavelengthemoveriform to me. Which is totally HOTT!

Finally a story that isn’t all I am man I must make woman bow to me! Also human take antibiotics which would help the infection go away. You leave the body prone to more infection without the protection of skin. If there is puss a drain can be put in and removed after it heals some more.

Starting of great. Seriously needs to be edited!!!

This might have been a good story if you bothered with spell check. After so many stupid mistakes I gave up.