All Comments on 'Empty Space'

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
You have to be.....

....an actor to be able to feel this and convey that feeling so well.<P>

<I>I stare up at that masked, single spot<BR>

clamped to some rod in Heaven.<P>

And when I see where it shines,<BR>

I know why actors stand here:<BR>

Because it shines on me.<BR></I><P>

Lovely.<P>

Tess

TheRainManTheRainManabout 15 years ago
I enjoyed this . . .

. . . much more than your Cento, which I found pretty disjointed. This one is fairly focused and cohesive, and written with a light hand that is easy to enjoy.

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