All Comments on 'A Surprise Affair'

An excellent first short tale. Let's see more.

Now a former happily married woman is gay, and the husband?

You have a Great story to start of with but you should get yourself an editor you made a small type o mistake "I had been eating her for years",

Pat

I agree. Another happy wife turns gay or bi-sexual as is the trend these days. Aren't trend and fashion victims sad people. They go with the crowd and don't think for them selves. A bit like this writer. But then it is a first time. I guess she will learn or not. Sorry but silly stroy for silly people.

Great story and kept writing and ingore the comment about gay women. If seem that your going to intoduce the husband into this story as part of a threesome. So write away and use the good people here to help with editing of your stuff.Because that love to help and encourge new writers.

I know, if you do not like the topic don't read. I get it. But in this case, I was intrigued until that comment early in the story. Implication? She has found sex better than her husband and will continue to cheat on him while she lets him supply his income to take care of her. Is she BI? Does not matter. She did this without asking, and if she loved him was not selfish that is what she would have done. Now there is woman who can make her happier than he can. That sounds like a marriage breaker! Why not write a story which is not just your sexual fantasy, but is also honest. The end for any normal man in this situation would be to divorce, not split everything and move on. I even wonder if this is grounds for anulment? Good writer! But disappointed in the plot.

Great start! Loved your sweet characters.

GREAT FIRST STORY. READING THIS WAS LIKE WATCHING ALL THE SEX UNFOLD IN FRONT OF MY EYES. SO VERY HOT AND EROTIC.

CAN'T WAIT TO READ EVEN MORE OF YOUR STORIES.

EXCELLENT WRITING AND FANTASTIC STORY

Amazing....really amazing....

When I was in the military this would have been called a quickie. Short, direct and delightful. I loved it. Thank you.

brilliant story love it. can't wait to read the next part so very hot and horny.

love both the story and the wrioting, keep them cumming.

Nicely done. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Itwas good reading.... OH, the meet up, the kiss it all seemed like a real story. Well written and very good detail.

looking forward to reading more....

Mmmm, the first seduction. Well done!

Great story, but there was one letter missing that had me in stiches! "My husband and I had been eating her for years". I think you meant "eating here for years",lol!

I LUV the way you write, and the things that your creative and deliciously dirty mind cums up with... Ace

Good story and a believable story line. Two gals getting together for some fun. Nice details and to the point, it got me moderately hard and wanting to here more about these two together. Also makes me think that when the hubby gets home there are going to be some hook ups with all three enjoying the others.

They were interested in the guy at the bar who had been watching the two of them.....