All Comments on 'Beast Ch. 02'

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spearman1spearman1about 15 years ago
Excellent!!

Ok !! You've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. What in the world is really going on? What is her Uncle if he's the one mauling and tearing people apart? Too many questions and too few answers!! Great second chapter you darn tease!!

TasteofHomeTasteofHomeabout 15 years ago
Intrigued

I am intrigued to see where this will lead. Keep up the good work.

mechmanasmechmanasabout 15 years ago
very good

this is a good story this rise a lot question i like the way u tell a story.

sacrificedangelsacrificedangelabout 15 years ago
Very Very good!

Already you have us wanting to know more of Roland's past, of Molly's past...and their future too! Looking forward to more!

wisperingwillowwomanwisperingwillowwomanabout 15 years ago
Wow

Ok you got me hooked. I can't wait to read more about Roland and Molly. Don't keep us waiting too long. I find your story very interesting so keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
love it really love it

this may be the first story your writing but your doing a damn good job of it.. I love this story so very great beginning I can't wait to see more from you.. believe me i've read alot of books and this is likely to turn out to be very very good.. i can't wait for more just keep posting...

Dragonknight146Dragonknight146almost 15 years ago
Great so far

Great work with this story so far. Ican't wait to see the next chapter. Just make sure it has a happy ending. ^^

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please continue

I hope you will continue this story. I would like to know more about Roland and Molly. I also hope there is a happy ending. Seems like they could both use some happiness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice

Please finish the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very good

please finish the story. i've really enjoyed it so far and am so curious about what will come next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
can't wait...

very good story, that's why I can't wait for the next part. Do continue it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
luv

luv it, continue it, plez

Insane4789Insane4789about 14 years ago

Exellent story, keeps you wanting more. Soon I hope?

PaganKittyPaganKittyabout 14 years ago
Welll....

are you going to finish or let me sit here and chew on my nails wondering what's going to happen next?? *growls as she hits the quick of her nail* SOON!! Please!?! =^_^=

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More please

Yep, just like everyone else I'm left wanting to read more, lol. Please don't stop and leave us all hanging!

SeductiveLlyarSeductiveLlyaralmost 14 years ago
Very Good!!!

I hope that you continue with this story. It is a really good read. Keep up with the good work!!

bearmad1963bearmad1963over 13 years ago
Great story

I hope you continue to write this story.

It is a good one.

Please don't stop writing it.

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
more PLEASE

i agree with the other comments please write more and soon i want to know wat happends next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good story

Your story is absolutely riveting! Your writing style is also easy on the eye.

TheNaughtyKTheNaughtyKalmost 13 years ago

Both chapters are great and I'm waiting for the next one!!

keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Waiting for more,

Please finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
yay

it got longer and is still very good. i look forward to more greatness from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it

Love the series keep up the good work can't wait for CH'3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Finish

Finish this please?? Because this is really great and I really hope this will not be another one of those well started but unfinished stories!

Maria_LunaMaria_Lunaover 11 years ago
finish!

Great story, hope you finish it!

flowergurl17flowergurl17about 11 years ago
please

Please please please please please finish it a really really good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
more

I have read this at least five times I like and I want more of the beast story

Katatude4LifeKatatude4Lifeover 8 years ago
So many years passed and no updates

Hope, in time, you return to writing and finish this.

ForrestersmateForrestersmateover 8 years ago
Beast ch. 03?

I wasn't expecting a non erotic story on here not what I come here to read but with that being said this is a pretty good plot start ......... are you going to write more?

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