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Gwen and Kim Ch. 02

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by Anonymous03/29/09

Hot!

More please...

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by Anonymous03/29/09

hott

this is hot!! the only thing is , the chapters are very short, make them just a bit longer, as they stand now , is like taking a sip of a water bottle, when you are in a desert, then throwing the bottle away without drinking the rest of the water...

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by Anonymous03/29/09

confusing terms

Yet another auther who can't seem to keep terms with different spellings and meaning though similar in sound separate.

Stop using "come" when the normal accepted sexual release version is "cum" its getting beyond a bad joke stage.

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