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All Comments on 'Brenda & Lisa: The Shopping Trip'

by leyna32

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
my opinion

I think the story was great. The buildup was OK but I would like to have seen more narrative after the mutual orgasm. The story seemed to just cut off. However, this will be a good leadin to further stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Juicy

Darling-you should continue with writing-perhaps you will become more honest with yourself & those in your life

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