All Comments on 'A Brothers Help'

by XXNoraJeanXX

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Yeah right

What guy would be turned off by getting a blowjob from his sister? I did NOT turn it down from my older sister and yes also had me fuck her........sweet pussy......so taboo yet SO SO sweet........

madengineer3madengineer3almost 15 years ago
Very Good!

There are those of us, from an older generation, who can fully understand the hero's feelings. If, like me, you had been brought up in the forties and early fifties the feelings expressed would seem very natural. Of course that all changed for those who grew up after the late sixties and mid seventies. This is a good read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
GOOD NIGHT!

GROSS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good Night! hehe

Gross...no! A bit twisted...yes! Can't please everyone. It is what it is. I admit, could be edited a bit better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Funny story

Like any girl has to go to her brother to find a guy who will "help her out."

If she had even one male friend, or a male friend of a friend, her situation would have been easily taken care of.

Unless...... No, there can't possibly be more to this story??? :-)

Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Huh?

After "Christain and Emily" this is painfully pale by comparison. It doesn't even read like a

Nora Jean Story. Whats Up Girl? Try again

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story!!!

Differant and entertaining. I wish more stories were like this. Keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loved it

i loved it it was not the best but i can easily see the effort and passion of the story and to the readers i dont think it is so much the idea of fucking your sister mom cousin or brother that makes it feel good but the idea that most the word thing it is immoral and you should not be doing it and that you know if you get caught you will be in a shit load of trouble but you don't care because i will admit doing things your not supposed to be doing feels 50 times better then if you are allowed to i got a blowjob from my mother when i was 12 and i must say it was heavenly and 5 years later i got one from my now wife and it can not compare to the sensation i felt when my cock was pressed in her lips

GainexGainexover 13 years ago
more?

I wish you would continue this story.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wantmore

please add more where he either fucks her or gets his friends to feed her too

dancampbell63dancampbell63over 13 years ago
Very Erotic

Your ability to tell a story and your imagination are wonderful. It would be a pleasure to know someone with your talent. (telstar2008@yahoo.com)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
write more please

wow great story you should keep writing about these two on if they have sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please Continue

Wow! that was really good. Thank you for this, but I want more. I appreciate your way of writing a story in great detail, really excellent. Please write more incest stories and you need to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
the guy who had the untitled comment should write this story abut his daughter and him fucking all these eyars, his comment was fucking hot.

I'd love to read how he got his man tool into her young hole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A different kind of set up for sure

A pity you've abandoned this one. Have to say the dude was just too reluctant to be believed. Who was he meant to be - the freaking POPE?

Gave it 3 stars since it was too short to deserve more and you really need to get help with your vocabulary (manor/manner; vale/veil from another story) - or else just stick to words you're certain about. At least proofread it yourself to catch stuff like "swallow him[his] cum" before you submit.

You have a talented imagination but you need help with the writing skill - even for here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
its funny

it was funny imagining that guy situation. but what if we knew at the end that she is not pregnant?!!!!

petecopetecoabout 12 years ago
Ask your self

To anonymous if you can only be negative then I truly feel sorry for you. I know who you are and I know you actually hate this site and either you have a religious hang up or you just hate life. Leave the writers alone. Everyone now pays zero attention to what you have to say. Your just wasting the space that people who actually have something constructive to say unlike your negativity. You should have more pride in what you say. As for the actual story I quite liked it and would like more ch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
SISTERS/PREGNANCY CUM/SLUT

NOW I KINDDA THINK THIS IS NICE, ALTHOUGH I THINK THE BROTHER COULD HAVE GIVEN HER HIS CUM ALOT SOONER BUT I'VE NEVER KNOW A MEDICAL

PROBLUM LIKE THIS BUT STRANGER THINGS HAVE HAPPENED ALL IN ALL GREAT STORY NICE ENDING A LITTLE SHORT A COUPLE OF MORE CHAPTERS

WOULD BE NICE I GIVE YOU A GOOD 4 STARS FOR THIS,,,,,,,,,,,''R''...........................

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
cum sucking

he should have fucked her too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
an okay story, but...

it should have been her brother who fucked a baby up her cunt. It's in his sis's cunt that a big brother's sperm belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Need more chapters

Plz plz plz plz preety plz continue this story until the babys born, its reaaly sweeet. Maybe she could repay him with her milk or something

jott50jott50about 9 years ago
unlikely...

but ohhh so hot...lol

MagicDanilMagicDanilabout 9 years ago
Sweet and verrrrry sexy

A good brother helping his sister albeit reluctantly. My my my. Good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This deeserved a second part or chapter...where he gives in to sisters growing appetite for more cum from many more blow jobs!

OwlBearOwlBearover 7 years ago
Needs a part two

Your writing style is unique, but overall I enjoyed the tale - you nailed the reluctance of the brother, the interaction of the siblings, and the sex was very erotic. The characters are sketched together well enough I'd love to hear more of their story...can he resist temptation and keep the release oral only? Or will he succumb to the natural closeness of his sister and take her to bed? I'd love to see another chapter...or two...or five! Nice work! Thanks for sharing!

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