All Comments on 'Baptism at Indian Lake'

No mention of birth control and very natural. Perhaps future extensions can show a development of a baby wanted?

This was a wonderfully written story and I hope it wins the contest. It was sweet and romantic although I did find the dialogue to be a little fake at times.

Enjoyed the story very much, good luck in the contest!

Very pleasing story, on theme and highly erotic. Moved quite fast, but then sometimes thats how it is. I know you will do well in the contest.

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