For starters, cut out a few words:
If I could, I would draw you
Instead, I settle on touch
maybe it wouldn’t be bad
knowing you by feel
stumbling across you
Then eliminate an "ing" word or two.
Thank you Eve. I'm a little out of practice. If I start doing one a day maybe my muse will return.
Check out my blog if you want a wet pussy. It's in my profile.
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