All Comments on 'Her Breasts Are the Beginning'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
sweet

slow and sweet.just how it should be the first time together.there's more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too short

This first chapter in this story lacks a proper introduction the the characters. Instead, the reader is presented with a situation devoid of any explanation as to how it came about. The chapter itself is also too short, and it could have been much better.

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