it thinks brings so much joy, and often
Your story is very good. Well written. No spelling mistakes. No tense errors. And it appears it is of a very hard lesson learned. Good luck to you. You are a very lucky submissive to have a Master like the one you serve.
Oh, the other comment writer has no clue what they are saying.
I liked that. Interesting style which captures the mindset very well. I'm an active submissive as well. So I understand perfectly the consent and the abandon that allowing these dynamics to play out can afford.
Liked the way you did it third person. Made it a colder reflection of what you've clearly experienced (at least in terms of dynamic, if not in terms of such a harsh punishment).
it's so true- the harsh physical pain is nothing compared to the sense of failure- the sense of letting a Master down.
you have shared so openly, that each thought and feeling becomes fully revealed by a submissive who understands exactly why she is being punished, even though it hurts so much. . . thanks again for letting us into those heart-wrenching entanglements. xoxoxo from a kindred spirit. . .
Short stories are the hardest form of writing. This one is well done, with the perfect amount of detail, and a lack of extraneous BS. As a psychological study that captures the essence of one of the many kinds of PE relationships, it is captivating. I liked it.
so no matter what you do for him, it won't ever be enough. He's actually got you believing that you deserve to be treated this badly. He will always find something to be disappointed about so he can excuse his sadistic need to beat you harder and more viciously. I'm a woman around your age and I feel sad that you have so little love for yourself.
I loved the story. The details are great(:
You're story helped me put my feelings into words for my Master.
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