All Comments on 'New Job Pt. 04'

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KatLadyKatLadyabout 12 years ago
Kim got off too easy

She was wrong and should've paid for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Rushed Ending

I'm disappointed that you decided to rush this series to a close as if you ran out of time. There was a lot of set-up, but no payoff. Not quality work.

DownUnderThunderDownUnderThunderabout 11 years ago
Great potential!

The story was great, I loved reading it!!

Im a little dissapointed, with so many more possible stories I could have seen it going on for longer and being a great series.

new_readernew_readerover 9 years ago

Dude, what's with you and all these lame endings? You start off strong with potential to go a long way and then you just kinda flame off. Seems like you get tired of writing halfway through and just want to finish it with whatever crappy scenario you could come up with the quickest.

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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