All Comments on 'Daddy's Love Slave'

by MJMsPussycat

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SinsiousSirenSinsiousSirenalmost 15 years ago
XXXCellent

XXXCellent! IF I do say so myself.

Is there more to cum?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOT! Hope the Displine Part is as Good!

HOT, Great to see a writer return with even better material than before...Long and good story development. Looking forward to reading about the training and the displine and pain and pleasure more. The truck and the spaking was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Welcome Back

It's been much too long since your last story and this one is better than ever. You have a great imagination and a great talent for describing erotica in most vivid terms. Congratulations and don't make us wait so long for your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

SPELL CHECK !!!!!

bunny_earsbunny_earsover 12 years ago
thank god,

im so glad you decided to use an editor, this is much better than your alternative submission, im happy to say that i enjoyed this and was eager to read it without the effort of disecting the speaking, thankyou!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Still needs an editor

Please have your mamma proofread your stories. And more cunt pain, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Plagiarism your own work!

DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY THIS ENTRY IS THE SAME AS YOUR THE NIGHT DADDY CHANGED MY LIFE. WHY WOULD YOU COPY AND DUPLICATE YOUR OWN WORK?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
DAMN

i love you iloveyou i love you

vampirevalerievampirevalerie8 months ago

oh damn that got me so wet

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