All Comments on 'Her Breasts Are the Beginning Ch. 05'

by hafnium10

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very nicely done story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story but...

it would truly be great if you had taken the time to reread it and correct the typos and some of the grammatical errors such as too instead of to. Teachers usually demand that from their students :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Oh yeah!

You sure know how to use the english language. Thanks for your time and efforts.

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