by annaswirls
ham and turkey ( breast)..
I love the poem Anna. As your style, I feel like, have always felt, that your poetry was written just to me, as a reader (is what I mean). Your poems feel real and personal, whereas some poetry is snobbish and lofty.
One suggestion, the last 3 lines of the cherry pie from a can, you could lose them and not lose the meaning, ya know?
xo
NJ