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by annaswirls

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 15 years ago
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A really clever way of incorporating this trigger well done!

CuriouswifeCuriouswifeabout 15 years ago
This was sweet

I really enjoyed the ending.

normal jeannormal jeanabout 15 years ago
we did two....

ham and turkey ( breast)..

I love the poem Anna. As your style, I feel like, have always felt, that your poetry was written just to me, as a reader (is what I mean). Your poems feel real and personal, whereas some poetry is snobbish and lofty.

One suggestion, the last 3 lines of the cherry pie from a can, you could lose them and not lose the meaning, ya know?

xo

NJ

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