All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Daughter Ch. 03'

The way you wrote that chapter was beautiful. I like the way you described the seduction between Kyle and Stefanie. I like the statement that she said where she felt like a real woman again because of Kyle. It would be nice to see these to get together and stay together if that's what you write next in the storyline. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Story telling at it's best! Waiting for additional chapters.

:-)

With all these feelings of love and lust combined, perhaps another chapter or two could be written with them starting to want to make a baby and make their lovemaking into something more permanent?

Still very good and enjoying it! Some tense and phrasing errors in the chapters so far but no biggie really. Nice to see theres a few more chapters! (...and I *love* asian girls;)