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by Anonymous04/29/09

Get someone to edit your writing.

There's potential for a great story here but the punctuation and syntax needs a lot of polish. I like the premise and I'd like to see how this story continues.

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by slave2woman04/27/11

good story

why is there no continuation ?
You write excellent, keep on doing this

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