All Comments on 'C.T.S.A.'

by onyourkneesnow

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Get someone to edit your writing.

There's potential for a great story here but the punctuation and syntax needs a lot of polish. I like the premise and I'd like to see how this story continues.

slave2womanslave2womanalmost 13 years ago
good story

why is there no continuation ?

You write excellent, keep on doing this

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 9 years ago
Nice start!

Too bad this story goes absolutely nowhere! All set up and no payoff. You should have listened to the ladies in the C.T.S.A. and let them have their fun.

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