All Comments on 'Fantasy Fulfilled Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
VERY badly written.

It's almost as if you were getting more excited by each word you wrote. I guess if you are jerking off with one hand and typeing with the other it can be difficult. As for the story line? go read some other stories in exhibitionist section. There you will find hundreds if not thousands of stories like this one but much better. In terms of readabliltiy and erotic content. And get someone to look at your story and proof read it for you. this was really badly written. I didn't like you other story becuse of the content. This one seems okay just rushed and badly written.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
the story is OK but is he going to let her fuck

She is showing him her pussy, so let him fuck her. Her husband could watch her pussy being stretched out while she cums on another man's cock

MySexyCurvesWifeMySexyCurvesWifeabout 13 years ago
Good girl!

What a Hot Sexy Wife Shanny is! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yawn

Slow. Self centred. Boring

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Shanny is a great name for a stripper and a whore.

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