All Comments on 'The Slutty Soccer Moms' Surprise'

hottt story..but for women/moms like myself and real hot bi couples.. like us..nothing is a bigger turn-on than being able to watch and be a part of dad/son bi action.. your scenerio would have been so much more sex charged...had the stud dads been bi too...and let the slut moms watch and participate while their jock stud sons and dads got into really hot bi action..with the slut moms being their cum sluts..

excellent story I almost need a part two

Best i've read here in years. kudoz

damn I wish I was there fucking them hot moms, that story got my dick so hard and had me cumming hard.

damn I wish I was there fucking them hot moms, that story got my dick so hard and had me cumming hard.

...I would have left the fathers out... one of Klrxo's trademarks is that the fathers are totally unaware that their wives are helping their sons come of age... or if they are, the wife makes sure to cockold him into humiliating acceptance....

In my area we have a 'girls' only club. the MOMS all get together and have brought their daughters into the club. We have over 75 members

Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

How about using your excellent writing skills and doing a story about moms and their daughters.

wow is the only word i got for it

I also took away 50% for the shallow storyline. When you wrote: "Guys, now your mothers want you to take part in the fun and games. Guys, your mothers want to fuck you." >>>> At that point I quit reading as I thought; "What the fuck kind of parents are these?" I was so impressed by not ONE of the kids having a second thought about fucking Mommy. Just amazing. I'm gone...

Good!!!!!!!!!!

You sir, along with Klrxo, BarondeSade, Columfa, Vertigo J, Pookie, alwayswantedto, nikki 2020/21, mary 0256, chargergirl, Anne240, preggo-fan, Manofthehillpeople, Slickman, EldridgeOO, polyman, jessy19, scouries, SinsiousSiren, south_beach_babe19, ronnie11, mtnman2003, A_4_playboy, & several others are the best writers on this site! Not just in the incest/taboo category, but on the entire site!!!-Jim

you are a specialist. keep writing these kind of group fucking stories. i love to read your stories

What a great story line! I believe it is time for a new story lineand this time include the new girl friends of the sons and the different Mom's and Husbands as well.How about it?

hmmm what a shame.. a slut mom :(((

this the first time, ive found a story to be humorous and erotic. i mean her sense of humor is outstanding. i know its a 4 part series but anything more you can offer of this type would be greatly appreciated.

One of the best I've ever read!!

please go on with your great work......

Fuckingly awasome.

Can you write more about this tpe of family ?????

what a wonderfully terrible & naughty mother fucking community. Great job

I'm not very fond of swinging stories, particularly when they involve so many people, but once again you delivered one fun and hot piece of erotica here. A little over the top, but a good story anyway. Thanks once again, Ahabscribe! ^__^

you have to continue this story they have to get pregnant with each other and their own sons and the saga continues when the off spring becomes legal.. now get to writing (smile).

EXCELLENT - Extremely Erotic

Well written story perhaps a little bit exaggerated - But Woww Excellent.

More of the Same Please.

What about a Prequel - describing what the Moms did in their early Girl-Girl escapades.

And then a sequel - The fathers have to go off for a a "Dirty" fishing four day period and the Moms and Sons Take a Cruise.

Ranji from Sri Lanka

At ferst I don't think I was going to like it because it dint have the beld up that the others had but when the sex party stared, that more then made up for it, but I don't like the way it just ends. It would be nice to at lest hear if they got ther moms pregnant that's all. Sill loved it. :)

This is a wonderful story as are all of this excellent writers tales. One small objection, though, really a personal preference. It's fun having all the moms getting fucked by the well-built sexy athletes of the soccer team. But it'd be better if each boy was fucking his own mother, shoving his big stiff prick up into the cunt he came out of and finally blowing his young balls up his own mother's mommy-twat. The guys egg each other on, "Hey, Sean, drill your momma's cunt, you motherfucker!" and "Keep fucking your own birth canal, Tim, that cunt is yours!" The air is thick with totally uninhibited motherfucking, as each of the fine athletes pounds his fat prick up that wonderful hole between his mother's legs finally emptying his balls up his mother's twat. Each pair kisses soulfully, the boy's prick still buried in his mommy's cunt. Most of the mother's get pregnant from all the potent sperm their boy's shot up their belly. The ones that don't try again until they do.

please tell me this will be revisited.

I don't often comment but this was an amazingly sexy, raunchy, fuckfest. I think a mother loving her son is wonderful but a mother loving her son and he son's friends, whom she has essentially helped to raise, is a very hot compounding of all that's wonderful with the intensity of mother-son intimacy.

It's a little disappointing that the story wraps up so abruptly but that does leave myself and, I'm sure, many of your other readers hoping for a second installment--and maybe even more than that.

Wow, that was one fabulous story. Very well written and HOT

After the gradation and week-end sex fest of family fun lol

all the son's of the mother from now on should be wearing

collars and leashes when they do mother swaps and weekend trips to lakes lol

but most importantly all of the mothers should from now on lol do

their weekly - family duties in the complet and wonder full life style of naked ness

but only with in thy neighbourhood and house's lol but not in public retailers :( lol.

great story

Enjoyed the fantasy and the reality hidden away. Would love to see part 2 as your entire college soccer team joins in.

Incest can be a wonderful lifestyle................you did well, Add another chapter, we will all enjoy it.

Nadine

The whole story was entertaining and flowed well thanks.

One of a few stories that I really enjoyed and would love to have be part of that story in real life.

Love to read the next chapter?

Love it fuck me

I only had to count back seven comments and I reached ten years. Authors really do work for nothing. It is no wonder that so many go off and do other things. This story has everything. It's written well and is very intense. Certainly five stars and one to return to later. Many thanks for writing.