by Lez_writer
usually i'm not a stickler for grammar...one or two misspelled words here and there w/e...but there were a ton of errors in this. i like the story but please proof read any future stories. the multitude of grammatical errors is one of the only reason i didn't rate it a 100%
Nice part
i have been following ur stories for quite a time, and find it really interesting, please continue your good work