All Comments on 'A Spanking'

by kara24

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RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 15 years ago
Mmmmmm!

A delicious story . . . well-told.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOT!

Hot fucking story, from a hot slut. you know the sexy joy of submissive spanking, for sure,babe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SO fucking HOT!

well written and you are there every wonderful beat of the way- GREAT!

bigdaddymackmanbigdaddymackmanover 14 years ago
Fantastic!

I think if I jump in the pool I might cool down enough to go to bed! Hot!!!!!!!

Very very well written!

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 14 years ago
OMG! Hot!

Excellent story of submissive spanking. Nicely done.

escriterraescriterraalmost 14 years ago
Sublime

The anticipation is always such a wonderful part of an imminent spanking for a naughty girl. You captured the crave-this-but-I-really-shouldn’t aspect nicely. Standing nude, knowing that the man who knows your desires is taking the measure of his disobedient charge, well aware that your erect nipples and clit provide mute testimony to your need for what he is about to provide – ah, how delicious! Does he look in your eyes, searching for your surrender to him and his pacing of the spanking and the timing of your climax? How do you possibly keep from squirming before him, knowing that he will soon penetrate your most private places?

And in the end, the release proves that, yes, you really, really should do this, surrender in this way, please him and yourself.

A lovely story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
just read this Kara

now I found this thru fetlife and I'm glad I did...you have a real talent...it was innocent but so Horny! nice one Kara ...canestar x

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 13 years ago
Nothing hotter

There is nothing hotter than a women who can cum from pain... Excellent!

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
A sweet and lovely tale...

and well-written too. Gives me an insight into my beloved partner's mind. Sometimes. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Truly delicious. You did a fantastic job of turning a loving marriage into role play. It's a rarity that any writer can turn equals into a Dom/sub scenario, without it getting crazy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful, ABSOLUTELY Wonderful!

Kara, you have a very special talent as a writer. A sweet and loving story about two people in love, but are unafraid and able to help each other reach their true depths, together. Magnificent and delightful!

HubeeHubeeabout 12 years ago
Wonderful!

I wish you'd write some new stuff Kara

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
perfection!

so nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow, So HOT

Short and sweet but one of my favorite experiences

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