All Comments on 'Kissy Kat'

by Lucky Mann

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good start

...but too much work on the macho stuff and not enough on the detail... put enough hot detail in and even acting like a dick will go over well...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Meh

Machismo. More sorry for the girl your protagonist married. She's stuck with his egotism longer.

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