All Comments on 'Jeremy's Journey Ch. 01'

Pretty well written with no obvious errors. The theme is fairly common, but well done for a first effort. Hope you continue it.

well written... good start but dont leave it here.. do continue....

This was a great story with a great ending, "Mom!?!?!?!"

I hope that's a 20 year old daughter who's about to introduce her mother to girl on girl love, with Jeremy's assistance and participation. I hope each of her children is a daughter. This would be a terrific story even if written by a pro. Keep this story going.

An excellent story! Is there a Part 2? Or is that all you had?

Sequel needed

Unfortunately, once again a great story that will not be continued